I've enjoyed reading your story in three parts. Had me reflecting on getting older and losing relationships of whatever sort, people or places or other creatures, even plants. As for Hargon feeling that there was something missing for him, something he didn't have on earth that he'd had elsewhere, seems like that is the way it can feel, getting older, things changing, feeling alien. I liked the way words were both nouns and verbs, booking and so forth.
I've enjoyed reading your story in three parts. Had me reflecting on getting older and losing relationships of whatever sort, people or places or other creatures, even plants. As for Hargon feeling that there was something missing for him, something he didn't have on earth that he'd had elsewhere, seems like that is the way it can feel, getting older, things changing, feeling alien. I liked the way words were both nouns and verbs, booking and so forth.